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Pain Of The Heart by ~matsaada:iconmatsaada:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I知 sorry; I知 not what you need,
But without you all I do is Bleed.
I wish I could do something to change your mind,
And make you think, I知 such a great find.
But all I am is an average guy,
One that first off seems very shy.
But if you want someone that will always care,
And make sure he値l always be there.
And someone that will think your irresistible everyday,
No matter what other people say.
Then I知 the one you should look to,
Cause no-one will ever love you like I do.
©2005-2008 ~matsaada
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I had to make this one rhyme, goes together nicely I think.

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~Dr-Pepsi:iconDr-Pepsi: Jan 10, 2005, 8:00:09 AM
I think this is really good!! :w00t!: Great job!! :headbang: :boogie: :dance: :w00t!: :clap:

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They make fools of us together but we always think of them. All their laughing and their talking and their wasting of our time. And it always hurts to see them now that everything is different...
~Lonewolfzero:iconLonewolfzero: Jan 10, 2005, 8:04:56 AM
Excellent ending. I know how you feel. -Great piece. ^^

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With every single piece in it's place, we go on living without balance.
As much as we desire, as much as our hearts desire....
Beneath the same sky we were born under, let light and shadow repeat.
~yasha-gurl:iconyasha-gurl: Jan 10, 2005, 9:31:30 AM
Awww i love this one very much!!
So awesome!!

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Life is not measured by how many breathes you take....but how many moments take your breath away....
~everyotherday:iconeveryotherday: Jan 10, 2005, 2:01:37 PM
its goooooood

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find me, hold me, love me, miss me when i break your heart.

o wont you join us..... ~unknown-poet-project
~spastickittie137:iconspastickittie137: Jan 10, 2005, 4:28:10 PM
Aww that is just pure adorable-ness ess ess..yeah..
~gamemaster87:icongamemaster87: Jan 10, 2005, 5:42:15 PM
Awesome man. Keep it up, fave.

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My new lj. [link]

And please read my story It Takes Character. [link]
~trinitybabe111:icontrinitybabe111: Jan 10, 2005, 9:50:03 PM
awwww that's so sweet! :innocent: well cya around. Look foward to to be reading more from you. Love much!

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:heart::butterflytwo:~Tina~:heart::butterflytwo:
~darkhorse4002:icondarkhorse4002: Jan 10, 2005, 10:31:44 PM
Well written my friend :headbang:
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